song of sorrow

SONG OF SORROW

I remember as a young boy
seeing my grandmother sitting
on her porch on warm
summer evenings, and hearing her
singing her hymns in a
high pitched mournful voice rooted
like the white pine in the lonesome
aged hills of eastern Kentucky,
where she had learned in little
country churches how to turn
sorrow into song.

7 thoughts on “song of sorrow

  1. Rae Cobbs

    Your word choices and your line breaks have a rhythm like a porch swing or a rocker. The images are compelling:

    “high pitched mournful voice rooted
    like the white pine in the lonesome
    aged hills of eastern Kentucky,”

    My voice is so shaky now, I believe you must have loved her exactly as she was.

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    1. james wheeler

      Rae, i spent the day visiting with relatives, one soon to be ninety three. they talked about our family, of course, of those who had passed before us including my grandmother. and while they talked i sat and rocked in an old rocker a friend had made for one of my aunts. then when i got back home i finished this poem i had been working on…

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